Stephen A. Bruno
English 200/ Professor
Hill
“This I believe” Essay
21 September 2016
A
Few Words
Can Change Your Life
During my senior year in high school, I figured
out what was meant when my track coach said very powerfully “Hard work beats
talent when talent doesn’t work hard”. Those words to me mean that no matter
how talented somebody is, Hard work will always prevail because you actually
have to work for it, it’s never given to you.
My beliefs are simple and stem
straight from my coach’s wise words. That is that anything is possible to
achieve once you start using words such as the ones I live my life by. Those
are Motivation, Dedication, and Determination. Once words such as these are
used as assets in your life; you won’t ever let something with true meaning to
you slip away and given up on. You never truly lose sight of the goal big or
small if it has true meaning to you and you definitely won’t lose grip of the
future you so clearly see once you start to live by what you believe in.
My beliefs weren’t always what
they are now. The words dedication, motivation, and determination weren’t
anything I saw clearly at a young age and until I cracked my wrist and damaged
my back in my third football game of my senior year of high school football; I
thought talent in the sport I loved would get me anywhere I needed to go. Well,
let me tell you I was dead wrong and I was going to have to work hard for what
I wanted to achieve in life.
Starting with my health. Being big
was all I ever knew in life and my position I played in football kind of called
upon being an immovable object. A change in living arrangements soon after my
injuries was the final straw for me. Watching what my uncle goes through,
struggling with diabetes wasn’t anything I was looking forward to in life and
weighing in at over 300 pounds it was the path I was ironically “Sprinting”
towards.
I say ironically because perhaps
my greatest decision in life up to this point was joining my high school Track
and Field team. Track not only gave me another chance to be somebody in life,
but opened doors for me that I never saw coming. I was more Determined,
dedicated, and especially motivated then anybody in my school and it was seen
and awarded. I went from the 303-pound kid with nothing going for him to a 179
pound “Student Athlete” with nothing but a bright future. I lost 120 pounds
within my final six months of high school and honestly can’t say that’s possible
if I didn’t live my life by the words I stated above.
I educated myself on everything health
related and now am pursuing a degree in sport management to one-day help in a
bigger way then just speaking.
More often than not you hear people
using these strong words as excuses. The best one being “I’m not motivated
enough”. That’s just a sad way of saying no I like where I’m at. There is
always room for improvement and nobody has the right to think otherwise. Nobody
does by watching, one must go out and fight for greatness.
One must learn to reevaluate their
life before they can ever make improvements upon it. Adding a few strong words
to your vocabulary will change your life tremendously, I am living proof that a
few simple words can go along a way.


I really like this piece and can relate to your beliefs as well! Starting my high school career I knew I wanted more out of life much like the realization you came to you your senior year of high school. I cannot believe you lost 120 pounds in 6 months! Amazing is an understatement! I commend you!
ReplyDeletethis unbelievable how you lost that amount of pound but hard work pay off and that's good, I relate to that situation I am struggling a lot same way. did you wanted to give up in those 6 months working out?
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